Reviews for Outside the Box
chartonjeremiah chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Wow, what a poem! You don't just understand the words, you experience the poem. Can't wait to read your next poem
older ego chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Wow I love this poem... it flows so well, especially at the beginning...and then it links back at the end. Perfect- i love it. keep writing]
lymli chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
I like this way of writing and it's good, interesting story.