Reviews for Prize of the Warrior |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I see 'last updated: 2009' and I have to say, I'm disappointed. I'm really enjoying this story - I know it's a long shot, but I would like to follow the story in hopes you may consider updating. 7 years later, I must be crazy - but here's to hoping! :) |
![]() ![]() Taking into account you were only 14/15 when you write this, it's very, very good. You did brilliant research in native Americans and the colonial period. Only minor things are the general presentation of the story. Misspellings, too many names given for unimportant characters, jumping perspective. However, you're obviously older now and these issues are easily fixed. It's haut a shane you haven't updated in years. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adored this story. Spelling mistakes and typos aside, it is AMAZING! You should update soon... Update soon... Or I'll find you... And.. Update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was this story ever completed ? and if so, under what title ? |
![]() ![]() You have such an amazing story. WHY U NO UPDATE? FIVE FRIGGIN YEARS! Sobs uncontrollably. I'll give you cheesecake everyday if you start updating again... |
![]() ![]() Love your story! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! I am finally glad to see that an author is using a language barrier! It makes the story so much better and the chance for longer more developed stories. I hope you update soon! *Spoiler* The anticipation of the battle for Sara is killing me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why you no update? Sniffles* |
![]() ![]() ![]() just love the katrin & Calling Hawk moments. it is 2012 and this story haven't been updated since 2009. w that is wrong. Come on and update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would hate for Sarah to get the sucking man hitting her thing bc it's not right and I doubt the tribe would go for that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fighting wolf is creepy but I would think he was a good man to his wife. From is character I would think that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait for more chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait to find out what is next |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting storyline. the characters are just lovely. |