|Reviews for Numbers|
| Jennifer chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
To me, it makes more sence to have it as "number one" instead of "the one."
But that's just me. I'm really starting to like your poems. You wirte ones that people don't write about everyday, at least i don't see it.
I like it. Make some more.
| Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
A good message, particularly if both parties have good/genuine intentions in mind.
Nice rhyme scheme, too. I thought the ending line fit very well.
| EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Wow, you make a valid point there. How young is 'too' young when you know what you want?
Good rhythm with the rhyming, well done!
| LettersOfMarque chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Wow - the wierd thing is that this completely applies to my situation a while back. I like it - it rhymes without being too Dr. Seussy, and it really gets the message across. Awesome joB!