Reviews for You're Gone
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Its short with lots of emotion. Great job!

xKristie Mariex
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
I like this.. it's short, but it has a lot of raw emotion in it. The only thing is "i can't leave" it seemed odd since the reader doesn't know where you are or where you would leave to. Maybe I can't move might work better? Anyhow it's a really great piece. Nice job