Reviews for Filled chocolate
Candace Jane chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
this is beautiful. You have an eye for the right word choice.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
This is so sad, part of me wanted to cry. But the poem is very beautiful. Nice job.

XKristie MarieX
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
I realy lked this! I liked how you arranged your poem, and how the words flowed! You're good with that!

I like the words you use to express your feelings, and how you end the poem with a final sentence in a paragraph alone. This poem is filled with emotion, and well-written, I think!

Keep at it!

The Reverse Edge Blade
Black peeches chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
beautiful :)