Reviews for yesterday |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 'I crossed you out Over yesterday's bookmarks' I really, really like this one! The feeling of emptiness in the subject is a nice contrast to the rich description... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your first stanza and your word choice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the imagery and metaphors here. I was going to quote favourite parts, but there are too many stunning lines. Deep, really hit home. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this: You ran your tracks all over me like a derailed train and I, a lost engine stayed put in the middle of nowhere. it's a goodm poem. |