|Reviews for yesterday|
| kisses-and-gasoline chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
'I crossed you out
Over yesterday's bookmarks'
I really, really like this one!
The feeling of emptiness in the subject is a nice contrast to the rich description...
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
i love your first stanza and your word choice.
| lost for words chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
I love the imagery and metaphors here. I was going to quote favourite parts, but there are too many stunning lines. Deep, really hit home.
| lymli chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
I like this:
You ran your tracks all over me
like a derailed train
and I, a lost engine
stayed put in the middle of nowhere.
it's a goodm poem.