'I crossed you out

Over yesterday's bookmarks'

I really, really like this one!

The feeling of emptiness in the subject is a nice contrast to the rich description...

i love your first stanza and your word choice.

I love the imagery and metaphors here. I was going to quote favourite parts, but there are too many stunning lines. Deep, really hit home.

I like this:

You ran your tracks all over me

like a derailed train

and I, a lost engine

stayed put in the middle of nowhere.

it's a goodm poem.