Reviews for Stay the Night
Jubbles Bubbles chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
I like the rithym on this one. I like the way you mixed music and dance and passion in this poetry.
Yellow Duvet chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Aww ... so bittersweet. Great job, the emotions are very strong in this poem and your words were chosen so carefully and are so effective. A fave, I think.
a certain slant of light chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
O_o

This reminds me of Bill and Tom. Then again, everything nowadays kinda does. Anyway, I really like this, love it actually. You combined such a strong love (to believe-but-not-really in it I have to think of it as Bill/Tom ;P) with music and the last line fits so perfectly (although, I think you should have a dot after the last line).

To sum it all up, this is amazing and I love it and I'm adding it to my favorites. xD
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
I liked this, I felt it conveyed emotion well. Good piece.

Faith