|Reviews for the way i let the words bleed you don't like|
| nobody's dream girl chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
this is one of the most beautiful poems I've read on fp;
| McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
your words do bleed
you create a disgusting beauty
i keep searching for the core
i think you might be casting a spell
imperfect and flawless
i'm afraid of you
have you succeeded yet?
have you run anyone through with your daggered words?
(I absolutely love it, and I hope you are not tormented as these words you wield suggest.)
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
wow, this is just so gritty and fierce. it flows too, like it can't stop and just keeps going in the rawness and honesty. i mean, amazing.
| MoonBlues chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
I really don't know what to say. Just - Wow.
Really, truly, wow.