Reviews for the way i let the words bleed you don't like
nobody's dream girl chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
this is one of the most beautiful poems I've read on fp;
McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
your words do bleed

you create a disgusting beauty

i keep searching for the core

i think you might be casting a spell

imperfect and flawless

i'm afraid of you

have you succeeded yet?

have you run anyone through with your daggered words?

(I absolutely love it, and I hope you are not tormented as these words you wield suggest.)

McKinley
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
wow, this is just so gritty and fierce. it flows too, like it can't stop and just keeps going in the rawness and honesty. i mean, amazing.
MoonBlues chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
Wow.

I really don't know what to say. Just - Wow.

Really, truly, wow.