Reviews for Bare Naked |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Pls, pls, pls finish the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() When will u update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() When do you plan on updating? |
![]() ![]() As I read this, I feel like I am watching events happen, but I don't know what's causing them. What was Angela's reason for caving to Maxim's demand? Not knowing Maxim's reasoning is what is driving the plot. Not knowing her reason puts a hole in the plot. Surely it has to be more than a surface attraction. She's honest with herself about his looks but she says his personality is lacking in the first chapter. Why would she then be willing to draw him naked |
![]() ![]() Since this is written in Angela's POV, I think we should see more of what she is thinking. When I read this, I dont understand why she changed her mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) update soon :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I live unfazed she is by his antics at times. :] -iCY- |
![]() ![]() ![]() That titanic reference at the end was hilarious. or IS heh. But yes it definitely is! Love it so far! -iCY- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh xD Hart. I have a friend with that surname and tend to refer to him as that. And man, Maxim Hart is so weird. Not in a bad way. He's just so unpredictable at times. Awesome! -iCY- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pleas please please update sion! Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I sooo hope that you come back and finish this story. The two of them are soo hott for each other and I just wish they could give in. I feel that Angela is going to get hurt but just as hard as Maxim plays, I thinks he probably feels as well, so he is going to make it up in a good way. I really hope that you update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() new reader~ :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been reading this story since the beginning, and I've got to say, one of the best romance stories I've had the pleasure of reading on this site. I was so excited when I saw you had an update.. can't believe it took me 4 months to notice! I really adore the way you describe the scenes the dialogue sequences are so well put together - I wish I could write as effortlessly as you seem to! :) -MB Louis |
![]() ![]() This is a fabulous story...Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Add another chapterrrrr! This story is to good to stop. |