|Reviews for Dream|
| Sekine Hana chapter 2 . 5/11/2008
I can't say I like this one. There are a lot of grammatical errors. [did I told(tell) you my name in the] [I didn't, do(did) I?]. These are just some. Make sure you check your grammar before you post it up.
I guess I don't like it because it's not my style. It's pretty much chick literature.
But if you like it the way it is, then it's fine, as long as you are comfortable with it.
| HeroR chapter 2 . 4/15/2008
A very cute chapter. I like how you break the fourth wall with your character talking to the audience. Keep up the good work.
| Aruru chapter 2 . 4/14/2008