I think chap 15 was a good ending, chap 16 being too...

cheesy? I don't know, cheesiness is good, in moderation, so maybe toning it down a little... :/ I don't know...

but I love the story overall, :D It's amazing.

Cute ending! I loved the whole story, and I'm glad you didn't overdo it or drag it out. It was an over all awesome story.

the ending is alright. at first i got confused i didnt know it was in the future. i wish u showed what happned between them. but its alrightt im happy with the ending.

It's not crap. :)

I think the ending was good. Aw...you're done. That's great! Loved the fic! Love you!

I guess I should've seen it coming but I wasn't really expecting it to end so quickly. Kinda blind-sided me. Maybe a real date would have helped but it was really sweet anyway.

Great work,

E.

ahh confusing ending D:

sorry i'm a bit slow today.

so archie and isobell got married ?

or was it some set-up by mickey as a movie thing. :S

conused ! ah.

but i still love it :)

this story was really cute.

I loved the ending! I can't believe this is the last chapter. It is a great story. Keep writing!

If it's The End, the status should say 'Complete'. Nice ending, but you should've filled in the space between Ch 15 and Ch 16.

Congrats on finished story!

I think you should definatly consider publishing this.

Its a great story i loved reading every chapter.

well that was a fast ending! the beginning was confusing i didnt get it..but wow 9 months can go so far haha.

Wow great ending!

It's seems perfect, except for the beginning where it's slightly confusing, but as I read it became clear.

I'd say you did very well with this story, it was a fun read.

I was kinda confused about the ending. But otherwise this story has been really good.

wait. that last bit confused me.

was the whole story a screenplay for a movie?

ahh. i feel so dumb.

or was mickey just making it into a screenplay?

haha. otherwise it was really cute.

that was a cute ending :)