Reviews for Wrong Number
ejafweofj chapter 16 . 8/9/2008
I think chap 15 was a good ending, chap 16 being too...

cheesy? I don't know, cheesiness is good, in moderation, so maybe toning it down a little... :/ I don't know...

but I love the story overall, :D It's amazing.
January Skies chapter 16 . 8/9/2008
Cute ending! I loved the whole story, and I'm glad you didn't overdo it or drag it out. It was an over all awesome story.
xbrunnettex0 chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
the ending is alright. at first i got confused i didnt know it was in the future. i wish u showed what happned between them. but its alrightt im happy with the ending.
Guest chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
It's not crap. :)
N.M.E chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
I think the ending was good.'re done. That's great! Loved the fic! Love you!
Kohlomere chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
I guess I should've seen it coming but I wasn't really expecting it to end so quickly. Kinda blind-sided me. Maybe a real date would have helped but it was really sweet anyway.

Great work,

cyanidecandy chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
ahh confusing ending D:

sorry i'm a bit slow today.

so archie and isobell got married ?

or was it some set-up by mickey as a movie thing. :S

conused ! ah.

but i still love it :)

this story was really cute.
Roman Candles chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
I loved the ending! I can't believe this is the last chapter. It is a great story. Keep writing!
Essevera chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
If it's The End, the status should say 'Complete'. Nice ending, but you should've filled in the space between Ch 15 and Ch 16.

Congrats on finished story!
misfit09 chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
I think you should definatly consider publishing this.

Its a great story i loved reading every chapter.
Rumsha chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
well that was a fast ending! the beginning was confusing i didnt get it..but wow 9 months can go so far haha.
Dreams of death by Chocolat chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
Wow great ending!

It's seems perfect, except for the beginning where it's slightly confusing, but as I read it became clear.

I'd say you did very well with this story, it was a fun read.
KelseyBell910 chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
I was kinda confused about the ending. But otherwise this story has been really good.
fairEtales chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
wait. that last bit confused me.

was the whole story a screenplay for a movie?

ahh. i feel so dumb.

or was mickey just making it into a screenplay?

haha. otherwise it was really cute.
SimplySweetnSour chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
that was a cute ending :)
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