|Reviews for Wrong Number|
| ejafweofj chapter 16 . 8/9/2008
I think chap 15 was a good ending, chap 16 being too...
cheesy? I don't know, cheesiness is good, in moderation, so maybe toning it down a little... :/ I don't know...
but I love the story overall, :D It's amazing.
| January Skies chapter 16 . 8/9/2008
Cute ending! I loved the whole story, and I'm glad you didn't overdo it or drag it out. It was an over all awesome story.
| xbrunnettex0 chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
the ending is alright. at first i got confused i didnt know it was in the future. i wish u showed what happned between them. but its alrightt im happy with the ending.
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
It's not crap. :)
| N.M.E chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
I think the ending was good. Aw...you're done. That's great! Loved the fic! Love you!
| Kohlomere chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
I guess I should've seen it coming but I wasn't really expecting it to end so quickly. Kinda blind-sided me. Maybe a real date would have helped but it was really sweet anyway.
| cyanidecandy chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
ahh confusing ending D:
sorry i'm a bit slow today.
so archie and isobell got married ?
or was it some set-up by mickey as a movie thing. :S
conused ! ah.
but i still love it :)
this story was really cute.
| Roman Candles chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
I loved the ending! I can't believe this is the last chapter. It is a great story. Keep writing!
| Essevera chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
If it's The End, the status should say 'Complete'. Nice ending, but you should've filled in the space between Ch 15 and Ch 16.
Congrats on finished story!
| misfit09 chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
I think you should definatly consider publishing this.
Its a great story i loved reading every chapter.
| Rumsha chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
well that was a fast ending! the beginning was confusing i didnt get it..but wow 9 months can go so far haha.
| Dreams of death by Chocolat chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
Wow great ending!
It's seems perfect, except for the beginning where it's slightly confusing, but as I read it became clear.
I'd say you did very well with this story, it was a fun read.
| KelseyBell910 chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
I was kinda confused about the ending. But otherwise this story has been really good.
| fairEtales chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
wait. that last bit confused me.
was the whole story a screenplay for a movie?
ahh. i feel so dumb.
or was mickey just making it into a screenplay?
haha. otherwise it was really cute.
| SimplySweetnSour chapter 16 . 8/8/2008
that was a cute ending :)