Reviews for Wrong Number
TammyS3 chapter 13 . 7/6/2008
aw. She's going to be pissed when the article comes out. Benjamins an idiot, I hate him. And Archie is the cutest guy ever!
Andy L. Kennedy chapter 13 . 7/6/2008
Wow... what a place for me to find as the end! Until you update, that is... perhaps I'm not being clear?

What I meant is what a perfect, dramatic chapter to have as the ending when I'm just finding this. Seriously, it's the big "problem chapter," the mountain they have to climb to get to the end (which had better be happy, damn it!) and that's where I find it.

Ahh, what tragedy! :P
JEEZ chapter 13 . 7/6/2008
lordy lordy lordy! that was intense! I'm so glad she found out sooner than later, n what is going to happen with that reporter?


PS: I love you :)
xbrunnettex0 chapter 13 . 7/6/2008
aw archie. now ur going to have to win her back. he can do it tho.
soaring glass chapter 13 . 7/5/2008
wow, a lot happens here. I was so happy for them to finally meet! Gah, and then it all gets ruined because she finds out who he really is. And I knew that would happen!

Anyway, I enjoyed the chapter. I especially loved the first kiss laying under the whale. That is certainly a unique place for a first kiss.

Good chapter. Good luck with the next.
rachelaine chapter 13 . 7/4/2008
This was so good. :) I loved their date, until of course Benjamin came into the picture. :P Hopefully she doesn't stay mad too long.
N.M.E chapter 13 . 7/4/2008
This chapter was cute! I can't believe she walked away from him. That's so bad. But I think that that part was very quick. Just an opinion. But I still liked it a lot! Update soon.
lover or hater chapter 13 . 7/3/2008
ok first thing i want to say is that i loved this chapter it was sweet... it was filled with lust anger hurt it was good lol keep writing!
emilybh chapter 13 . 7/3/2008
I love it! Damn right Isobell should walk away! :D I love drama- update soon!
Kristen-Roxanne chapter 3 . 7/3/2008
Misdial me any day? God what kind of cheesy moron are you? Archie thought to himself.

(Ha, I thought the same thing)

The conversation was kind of awkward.

It would have been better if the person she had been calling was a guy and then rambled on, and then it kind of goes on from there you know? Something a little more believable perhaps.
Kristen-Roxanne chapter 2 . 7/3/2008
Archie removed his armed and started walking across the room to his en-suit bathroom

-I believe that may need some editing? It should say

“Archie removed his arm...”

I liked this chapter. It was longer and better structured
Kristen-Roxanne chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Confused Archie glanced behind him, and sure enough he found two highly attracting and very endowed women lying naked in his bed.

- Not a great way to start off that sentence. Also, you wrote attracting instead of attractive :)

Also, this extremly short. Way to short. You could beef it up with more information about the characters.

Will be doing POV from each one?
Essevera chapter 13 . 7/3/2008 story...
Kohlomere chapter 13 . 7/3/2008
Yay for April and Mickey! Now if only Archie were to be so lucky...

Great work,

Jainblu chapter 13 . 7/3/2008

I was bitinng my lip the whole time I read this chapter... It was just that awesome... and I ket giggling, and it's kinda latae, so I really didn't want to wake any one up, but wow...


I loved how at the end Archie's "true/ inner" actor was unleashed as he called out that parting shot/ desperate lat plea... thimngy... to Bell...

wow... sorry, but yeah, this chapter... I really loved it... I loved all the characters... especially Dexter... I just dunno, I think this chpater was fabulous, but I can't exactly pinpoint why, it may possibly be (read: is glaringly obviously) because Archie and Isobell finally met, which everyone has been waiting for for gaes... (well not ages... but you know) it is also because rthis was a real climax, you know... it actually lived up to all the build up... like all the anticipation, was worth it...

Okay sorry my review has been very long and rambly...

Oh!...and thank you so much for posting this... I was beginning to think people had just decided to go on a simultaneous hiatus.

Thank you _

I really really enjoyed this chapter :)
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