Reviews for The sky is too big to me to fly alone
SnappedxHeartstrings chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
this poem makes me feel like a little kid, but at the same time its sad too, i like that combination. and i love love love LOVE that the sky is to big for me to fly alone. its an amazing line
Splasher chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
I've read a few of your poems, and... Wow, you write beautifully!

I reviewed this particular one because the title was really intriguing. This was a great poem, and I absolutely loved how the words just flowed and sang as I read them. Very beautifully written song! Again, you're very good at this type of poetry.

I loved it!

-Splasher-
Thoughtful Silence chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
I liked the repetition in this poem, and the ellipsis at the end was a good addition in my opinion. Loved the title!

-Silence
Hail the Warrior chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
Thanks for the review of my piece.

I enjoyed this, though the flow was a little awkward in some parts, but the title is an awesome line/title.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
I do... it should be am. 'Cause you'd say I am scared

I like the whole sky being to big thing, but Im not really sure how a hug would help... but other than that I liked this.. the ending was especially nice and I liked the repetition
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
私はこのみじかいものがたりがだいすきです!あなたのことばはほんとうにすてきです。そして、メシセージも好きです。わたしはまえのことばがだいすきです!このさびしいメシセージはほんとうにかなしいです。

いいものがたりです!がんばります、ね!

The Reverse Edge Blade
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
A very well written poem, great job. Keep it Up!