|Reviews for the road to nowhere|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
good metaphors in the first stanza. I don't like the first two lines repeated at the end. it just felt... i don't know, maybe unneeded, especially since the last line of the third stanza would make such a great ending, i think.
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Great job on this. I especially like the first stanza towards the middle and end. Keep it Up!
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
your usage of imagery is wonderful.