Reviews for the road to nowhere |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good metaphors in the first stanza. I don't like the first two lines repeated at the end. it just felt... i don't know, maybe unneeded, especially since the last line of the third stanza would make such a great ending, i think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job on this. I especially like the first stanza towards the middle and end. Keep it Up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() your usage of imagery is wonderful. |