|Reviews for in the rain|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
i love how evocative this is, especially the wording in the second stanza.
'we still fantasize about
dancing the rain' -it seemed like there was the missing word 'in' before 'the rain'. also, was it supposed to be 'staring beyond the window *of*
economics class'? not sure, maybe just me.
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Very good imagery here, and a great poem. Keep it Up!