Reviews for Secret Smile
Emalee Bryant chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
The rhyme between smile, mile, and guile doesn't really work for gets in the way of what you're trying to say. It's really sing-song when the rest of the poem has a pretty serious tone.
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Some just have that gift of being able to keep a straight face through all the good and bad, excellent poem. Keep it Up!