Reviews for Living and Breathing, Etc
Darth Zannacross chapter 3 . 5/3/2020
Well, what starts off as a normal set of chores starts to spiral out of control, firstly Tagan understands she is clearly not a natural farm girl.

Sounds like she might need to call the Ghost Busters or something, though the real threat might be Nora's hostility exploding, we will see.
Starart152 chapter 2 . 5/3/2020
This is a nice chapter that gives us a real introduction to Tegan. We got the reason why she went to visit her aunt, even when she had little motivation to do it. Feels a little like a revenge plan from her mother.
It was a nicely written chapter.
As for her aunt, she has a few mysteries going on and the barn might also have some.
Darth Zannacross chapter 2 . 5/2/2020
We learn a bit more about Tegan and its a pleasant ride, aside from the tension Tegan has with her parents over her choices to spend the holidays.

Looks like there is a lot of tension with Nora. She's alive by the end, but how long will this last? Guess we will see.
Starart152 chapter 1 . 5/2/2020
This is a nice introduction to the story. I like that we know enough about the main characters life without any detail, but just enough to know that his situation was particular. He is not like many protagonist in this adventure, but he might turned into one. With the dead holding on the string, it could affect his social life. Or he might drag his friends in this mess or anything else like that.
Darth Zannacross chapter 1 . 4/30/2020
Hey there I been looking around for stories and this one seemed to attract my curiosity so here we are.

Well, clearly are main lead has some issues, almost feels like something from It...we will see how it goes but nice start to Tegan's journey.
Guest chapter 20 . 8/13/2017
Omg, I never expected to see another chapter of this, but here it is! This is great, literally made my day! Hope all is well and look forward to reading more!
Cylara chapter 20 . 8/13/2017
I was so thrilled to see an update on this story, and I loved the new chapter. Thanks!
AmandaKPerry chapter 19 . 1/14/2011
I am reviewing the last chapter (19) because I couldn't stop reading this. I absolutely love this story, its perfect! :)

Please, please, please, please keep writing! xD
MusicalGrl1016 chapter 19 . 1/7/2011
Wow, I haven't read a story in a long time and I can say that this is very good. I want to read more (but I understand being a busy student!)
Soothsayer35 chapter 18 . 9/6/2010
Intriguing plot and well written! I hope that you update soon! I'm definitely looking forward to how it ends/wraps up.
Kirhava chapter 18 . 8/26/2010
Wow! I've forgotten about this story until now!

Please, don't take to long to upload a new chapter, this is one of the best mystery stories I'v found un FP.
SpotWillRuleTheWorld chapter 18 . 8/25/2010
Very nice. You're really gonna stretch out this Uncle Jacl mystery arn't you?
Babiidoll chapter 17 . 7/7/2010
I absolutely love the story. Good work! Hopefully you'll be able to add more soon.
SpotWillRuleTheWorld chapter 17 . 6/4/2010
Funny how I keep reading this late at night. Gives me the chills. Good job.
Kitzophrenic chapter 17 . 5/7/2010
I'm quite enjoying the story so far. I'm glad you've made Tegan into a real person instead of another Mary Sue. Giving her faults like pride make her much more accessible to the reader. The supernatural elements aren't too hokey, as well, although personally I don't adhere to the whole religious aspect, but whatever.

All in all, a great read. I hope you update quickly! :D
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