|Reviews for Blue Skies|
| Beautiful Bones chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Again, this is a poem, NOT a song. It is not long enough to be a song. This would actually be pretty good too if you added more to it and used proper grammar and spelling. The rhyme scheme in this one was definitely better than your last one and I thought the (few) lines you had were actually pretty.
Score for "Unnecessary": 1.1 of 5
Score for this POEM: 3.5 of 5.
| Beauty From Pain chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Beautiful. I loved the imagery and the rhyme scheme was excellent. I also liked how you had two syllables, then six, and so on. Creating poems like that with an exact number of syllables is difficult, and you mastered it in this poem! Great job, and keep up the good work! ]