|Reviews for All Undone|
| Darx chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Great job on this one, really.
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Oh wow, the word choice is amazing. ''I challenge you to realize, the major flaws and minor seventh'' that was just excellent and the three lines before were too. Reminds me of music scales. Keep it Up!