Reviews for Two Halves of a Whole
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
I love the bit about feeling the tremor of the trains through the soil. Very original and it brings dimension to the piece. Cute poem. Keep writing! :)
flawlessangel08 chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Aww so sweet. good poem
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
very cute. I liked it :)