"Humanity wasn’t ready for your beauty:

Too busy destroying themselves

to accept something better."

That's quotable.

Lovely poetry.

and now, when, you’re fading away... separating when by commas seemed odd

I love this metaphor... it's really well done and very interesting. I also like the alliteration in the fourth stanza. The ending was a really true point. Great piece

[This is getting tedious (in a good way):] O_o

What a metaphor. Wow. The beginning made me go WOW and think of famous poets, such as Shakespeare and T.S. Eliot (my favorite poet

T-T so sad! And profound in a way I can't define! Excellent job!