Reviews for Flower |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "Humanity wasn’t ready for your beauty: Too busy destroying themselves to accept something better." That's quotable. Lovely poetry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() and now, when, you’re fading away... separating when by commas seemed odd I love this metaphor... it's really well done and very interesting. I also like the alliteration in the fourth stanza. The ending was a really true point. Great piece |
![]() ![]() ![]() [This is getting tedious (in a good way):] O_o What a metaphor. Wow. The beginning made me go WOW and think of famous poets, such as Shakespeare and T.S. Eliot (my favorite poet |
![]() ![]() ![]() T-T so sad! And profound in a way I can't define! Excellent job! |