Reviews for Fast & Hard
deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
please... dont hate yourself. Be frustrated with yourself, be angry at your faults, feel sorrow at your lacking, and by all means cry about a life that is filled with a pain I can only imagine, but hate yourself not. Hate has only one avenue to go down, and that is suffering and death. I dont know what 17 things you are talking about, and it is none of my buisness to ask, but from my standpoint, 17 of anything is a pretty good thing, be it happy memories, friends, or people that love you, or on the other side it is ONLY 17 of anything bad.

Feel better,

XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Whats going on hun? This poem is so heart felt and its so sad. Keep writing hopefully it brings some sence of release.

XKristie MarieX
casi chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
well written, the emotion is well portrayed, but the authers note there... i have to say it bothers me a bit (i hate that you feel this way about yourself and about lots of other things) but those are not minor details, if you are crying for the last 2 weeks, and something is bothing you this much... it is NOT a minor detail.

Almost nothing is ever a lost cause. They may seem like they are, but thats just because they take more work to either get over or to resolve.

love you

Jennifer chapter 1 . 4/10/2008

It's okay, you're not alone. I know how you feel. I've had to go through this for years of 3 serperate things, but after crying for a very long time, i finally asked myself, 'why the fuck am i crying? if they don't want me anymore, then i don't want them. there's no reason to cry over spilt milk! There's more fish in the sea.'

or something to that affect. but it got me to stop crying. they may be gone, but there will...ARE more people in the world.

they wont say hi, i wont, they wont look at me, i wont either.

i'm alot better now.


srry bout that. 17 notes? if so, i only had 2...


i love your work.