|Reviews for lightbulb in the hurricane|
| Nemonus chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
A commentary on modern people, eh? I like the line "I view your awe, and wish it mine" very much. Elsewhere the rhythm is generally good, though sometimes I thought that line breaks could do with reworking. "winds hold serve" doesn't evoke the wind-ness that another verb besides "hold serve" could. Not bad; there's certainly thought behind it, and the rhythm is good.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Very nice piece. Excellent job. Write on.
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Great job on this. I like how it portrays a letter effect, as if you meant to make it like we are the reader / narrator. Keep it Up!