Reviews for Aboslute Distance and a Single Line
theCoffeeEnzyme chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
This was fabulous. I positively adored "generally and relatively have nothing to do/with general relativity..." That made me smile.

You've written in a style that I wouldn't be comfortable with writing in. But, the style is what drew me in. The message is what the poem awesome. Cleverly depressing but still seeming quick. Or perhaps that's just how I read it. lol.