Reviews for An Unknown Variable
ardrsil chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
An intriguing prologue... I look forward to seeing how this continues. Not much else to add, at this point.
Ellieloo la Grimm chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
Your story has good flow and depth. I really like it.

Yes I know that was a short review but I'm tired. I'll try a longer one next Chapter :)