Reviews for i am simple |
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![]() ![]() ![]() konban wa I thought this poem was OK... until I got to the end, which is when I loved it. Those last few lines were beautiful: today, I want to learn everything like a six-year-old again before I slip and do a double take and become complicated again. Those lines - loved them. Especially the first two. Those were my favorite. Learning like a six-year-old again. That's just... so innocent. Can I add those lines to my quote book? Ha det -Shan- |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...it would be so nice to go back and learn everything like a six-year-old again. nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) nothing better than saturadays |
![]() ![]() ![]() you'll prove more true than those that have more cunning to be strange. (paraphrased shakespeare) the last verse is a surprise, in a good way. it's a good ending to a satisfying poem; i especially liked the fourth verse (if you count the first line as a verse). though "the ink of nature filling me out" is kinda awkward, to me. |