|Reviews for Those Scrawled Hopes|
| Shadows in the Fire chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
You are bringing this on Tuesday, and you have absolutely no say in it :P
I lovelovelove the line "Décor of this daydream" Falcon-lacon-loo! It's amazing-I kinda want to just tattoo it on my arm for today or something, haha. Or paint it on my wall.
"A thunderstorm that tore them up/That tore me down" 0_0 Whoa, can you say "POWERFUL"?
Also, I love the beginning: "Fairy-tales scribbled on my arms" mostly because, uh, it reminds me of you. Remember a week or so ago when you had something written on your arm and I asked about it? Yeah, that line reminds me of that moment. Which is a strange thing to remember but I'm a STRANGE person, Falkie.
A favorite, obviously. More importantly, a favorite of my favorites. Chaw.
-Shadow-lado-loo (who is freaking out because in the Travel section of the newspaper today there's an article on MOOSE!)
| Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
The beginning is so dreamy and childlike (I loved the line 'Fairy-tales scribbled on my arms') while the end is dismal and sharp and seems to come way too fast.
I guess this is what growing up can be like, though?
Awesome job here.