Reviews for The Man on the Moon Can Sometimes Cry
The Postscript chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Great job with the rhyming and format. The focus and clarity of your poems really stand out to me. Keep writing, k.
lookin4nemo chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
wonderrful! i love it so much! prob one of my favs

watch ur syllables and u'll b all set

great work! keep writing
Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
I was reminded a little of 'The Man in the Moon Came Down Too Soon' by Tolkien, but only because of the title. P

I was curious if you intended it that way?

My favorite lines would have to be 'I watch the tears fall from the sky/The man on the moon can sometimes cry'. It got me thinking about night rain.

Nice rhyme scheme throughout!