|Reviews for The Darkness of Pain|
| lookin4nemo chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
o! like this one! but when i say watch ur syllables i mean watch how they flow.. like cat.. is one syllable...darkness is two syllables dark-ness than there is beautiful is three.. beau-ti-ful.. but here is not the case.. u don't haf to put syllables in.. it juts makes evrything flow! Great piece btw!