Reviews for Mea Culpa
Solstice Of Light chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Very nice. A few adjustments I myself would make:

Just from the fourth line, I'd put at the beginning of the fifth line instead.

And the last verse just breaks down, though that COULD be what you wre trying to get, I guess :p

Other than that, it's a nice idea put across nicely :)

SoL