Reviews for Open ending
La-Jari chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
likin this a lot
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
-or you're just an angel?... I might stick with are you since that's how you have it in the line before

-Whenever say a prayer for me/since you said I could ask you... this confused me. Who is saying a prayer for you? And what did he say you could ask him?

-nowhere to go.. with nowhere

-if I was wandering/your sweet words sweetened my heart... ok the if I was is future tense and the words sweetened is past. So I would change it to When I was wandering and keep the next line or keep the first line and make it your words would whichever you like better

-It's not like an endless ending.. you can't really have an endless ending I dont think

I like this... it's interesting how it progresses from the beginning to the end. I liked that a lot. I also love the whole angel thing and then later on the whole wing thing. Nice job.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
it had a nice flow to it.
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
私はこのみじかいものがたりがだいすきでした!Favorite List!

ことばはほんとうにすてきでした。そして、たとえもいいです!てんしのふだつのはねをきようようします;

よかったですね!

もうをかいてください!

The Reverse Edge Blade