Reviews for Snow Petals
Thoughtful Silence chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
I loved this! The description is beautiful, and the imagery was well done. I liked the kind of archaic language of the last line; it gave it a more florid feeling and helped the flow. Good job! One minor thing though, I didn't like the use of 'engulfing' as this notion seemed to contrast with the connotations of 'soft’ ‘blossoms' and 'springtime snow'... though, now that I think on it, that could have been your point :)

-Thoughtful
moon-behind-dark-clouds chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
love it! really beautiful imagery )
Paytie-Pie chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Very nice.

Shippo
Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Very pretty. (:

I like how aspects of the two seasons are blended together (flower petals, cold ice). The imagery is very lovely.