Reviews for Closed Off
solidsnakeoo7 chapter 4 . 4/30/2008
im still wondering when this happened...lol. im just kidding but im not sure thats how it happened...

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blueroseofice chapter 4 . 4/15/2008
wow. I like how you ended this poem. I usually worry about some writters because their poems' endings are so anticlimactic or too disney happy how you set this poem up:)
blueroseofice chapter 3 . 4/15/2008
This poem has such a great rhythem to it that it almost reads like a song. This installment is short and superb.
blueroseofice chapter 2 . 4/15/2008
I think you mean one instead of on in the last line. This poem feels a little bit forced but it has so much raw emotion in it that it feels like you let the emotions steal the poem from you. But its interesting enough to make me want to read the following chapters!
blueroseofice chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
I love the lines with hear in it. This is a poem I totally relate to. I have slight ocd so it normally bugs me when people have long lines followed by like one or two worders. Although, it helps portray the chaos that we all feel. Good Job!