|Reviews for Teenage blues|
| kisses-and-gasoline chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
This one sounds like a song...
The irony in the last line sums it up brilliantly, I think.
| Deleted37 chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Hey, this is a really interesting poem. I like the imagery of the awkward teen girl, the 'blue fingernails, dark circles' and so on. And the last line, especially, does a good job of making you think about the rest of it-very snappy, but not in a shallow way.
Anyway, I like it. Keep it up!