|Reviews for Dreams For Sale|
| Link Broken chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
that was great! your perspective and talent amazes me
| BlackestOpal chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
It is amazing. The last two lines are phenomenal.
That's about all I can say.
| Unknown Sorrow chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
So true... Dreams not for sale. Again, love the content and it could be a great poem, but it doesn't seem to flow very well. I haven't read all of your poems yet, but I will; I recommend trying a free verse poem if you haven't already. Back away from the rhyme scheme. You can express so much more when you're not limited in what you can say 'cause it can't ryhme.