|Reviews for Short Stories|
| misery sister chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Haha, pretty funny - has a hint of real life to it. :P Haha, are you filipino? I dunno, cuz I know Happyslip shows Filipino famiy related stuff (I think), and my friend loves her too :P and yeah, she's filipino so she can relate. :D
| L K Blake chapter 2 . 7/9/2008
lol love it.
| L K Blake chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
lol yeah that is kinda silly :)
| Hele chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Sorry, I forgot to say before.
The first chapter shows a good level of description and mixture of sentence lengths and structures.
| Hele chapter 2 . 4/21/2008
Neither of these made me laugh.
I found the main character (Kevin/Henry- for goodness' sake, it doesn't take much to keep the main character's name consistant) of the first chapter utterly objectionable and unsympathetic. I also don't really understand why you found the need to tell me about someone taking out some rubbish. It's not exciting or interesting, and it certainly wasn't funny.
I found the poem in the second chapter simply inane. It didn't say anything.
There just didn't seem to be any point to any of this. I didn't feel that you had tried to achieve anything with either piece of work.
If you would like to take issue with what I've said, feel free to e-mail me.
| DBSKlover chapter 1 . 4/16/2008