Reviews for Give Us a Chance
anaa-pixie chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
storm42 chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
I recently read through "Whatever it Takes" and, while I was a bit disappointed that you never finished it, I was glad to hear that you were working on a rewrite.

I love Max's character. He's so cute and... lovable. D I really hope that you update this story.

supersaiyanx chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
Update soon- a great story!
Fuji Syusuke chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
Yay, that was awesome. I hope with the new rewrite comes more updates, I can't wait to read more!
SecretFeelings chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
See, I knew it was going to happen. Yet I still laughed hysterically.
chocolatechipash chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
not a bad start, but i liked the other version better but im excited to see how this will turn out. this one lacks something but yeah i think it was a good idea to introduce meghan earlier unlike whatever it takes. update soon, hope this one works out better for you.
puka.shells chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
ooh. what will she say? i want ellie and max, together.

even if it will be a long run, as long as they're together in the end.

and if not, just don't put meghan in the picture. i'd rather have him single, or go gay with eric, or something.

lol. sorry, though seriously, i love ellie. but shes rather biatchy here.
sweets555 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
adorable! Though at one point you wrote 'thin' instead of 'think'

great job!
katieee chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
It was torture reading through this the first time. Feeling so bad for Max, and then wishing that Meaghan wouldn't get him. And now I have to do it again. But hopefully Ellie and Max will get together. Like my other review, he likes Ellie more.
Sing With The Elevator Music chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
holy cow. i'm totally laughing. i love how becca pushed her had down. thats great. there were a few gramatical errors. you left a few words out. i think you can catch them if you read over it. i really like the story line. i'll deffinitely continue reading.

Her Acoustic Heart chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
Woot! Oh my gosh

I started reading this and thought to myself

"wow, this seems awfully familiar... to that one story I read... what was it called?"

And then i read the part before the chapter and it clicked.

I'm excited this story is starting up, I missed Max's shenanigans

X chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
it's nice. it's like the perfect high school cliche - which isnt always a bad thing. it kind of reminds me of james and lily potter from Harry Potter (i'm a die hard fan!) keep on writing!

NV12 chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
hey!yay im happy this is it going to be like the last one?and are you going to finish it this time?:)i hope you do
Yo Yo Yo chapter 1 . 4/15/2008

funny and good, but the last 3 seconds... uh..

hahah keep on going!