Reviews for Aedin
Kiveda chapter 1 . 11/25/2011

Yeah, something you said on your profile stuck with me. I'm a harsh critic too, and it bothers my friends who are used to praise. Sometimes, you need to be. I'm sick of people telling me I have an attitude problem, when really they can't take criticism.

So cheers, you're not alone!

Kiveda chapter 29 . 11/25/2011
Slightly Harry Potter-esque, but very interesting :)
RydenStewart chapter 26 . 7/5/2011
Wow - I just finished reading this, and I thought it was really interesting... I like the new take on the Adam and Eve story but i have some comments/questions...

1. Wasn't Eden in Israel? Which is kind of... not France.

2. Aimee seems kind of slow - I mean, she's lived in the world for 1500 years and still thinks she's human... without investigating ANYTHING?

3. I really like what you said about the Gardener, but why did he leave? What did the Elves do?

4. What happened to the keys? Did they really get melted (I mean come on, it's heavenly gold or something)? Will Lucifer get another shot at Eden (but this time humans stand in his way)?

Anyway, really good story - Rydie
peacelovewriting chapter 29 . 1/5/2010
this was so cute and i loved the plot.
Pretty Girls Make Graves chapter 21 . 9/7/2009
Is the Hungarian movie about subway workers in Budapest mentioned in this chapter Kontroll? Because I love, love, love that movie!
Dustland chapter 29 . 9/6/2009
really good story :)

the most interesting story i've read on here. :)

but, i have to say this story goes against everything i believe. lol it's a good thing i know what i believe and why :)
Crestfallen Smile. Happy Tears chapter 29 . 8/5/2009
Wow. I really loved this story. It was so...interesting.
reader chapter 29 . 6/14/2009
I liked the comparisons to typical action movies/ James Bond etc.; it was pretty funny. This was a nice read and super intriguing, but I feel like it kind of fizzled out at the end. It was a nice ending, but pretty anticlimactic. Thanks for the read though! I enjoyed it a lot.
reader chapter 21 . 6/14/2009
Even more interesting! I love your choice of title! I love this new word for Eden.

And the apple...
reader chapter 17 . 6/14/2009
Oohh. Cool. Yay! Interesting!
reader chapter 13 . 6/14/2009
Great build-up of suspense! Very intriguing, unique and creative.
reader chapter 11 . 6/14/2009
reader chapter 9 . 6/14/2009
This has been super interesting to read so far! I love it.
cara410 chapter 29 . 1/6/2009
You have no idea how much I appreciated this. Such a nice story. I loved Eric's character and Lucien was very creepy, indeed. The plot was well paced and original as well. Wow, you did a great job! I can't believe you don't have more reviews. This proves once again that quantity is not synonymous to quality. Because this piece of work pretty much rocks. I've got just a small correction to make though. In chapter 11, Eric wrote 'Aimee Clair a un mille sept-cent ans.' He should have omitted the 'un'.
Ngoc1231 chapter 29 . 6/26/2008
Aww cute story. At the beginning, I was mesmerized by Eric talking to her. I'm happy I stuck to the story )

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