Reviews for Aedin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hehehe, i don't hate Jessica any more! she is pure entertainment! im reading on to see what else happens!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story, I'd love to see a sequel! Maybe with...their child? *gasp* I didn't say anything. w |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just stumbled across this fic. I reached the end I was debating whether to leave a review or not. And i scrolled up to see how many reviews you had (Usually if that person has a lot I'll just skip cause I'm that lazy) and my first thought was 'HOLY-CRABSTICKS!'. How can you only have 41 when the story is obviously readable and entertaining? What's wrong with the world? To the technical story is well thought out. The ending wasn't cliched but I didn't understand the last sentence. No eye-glaring grammar or spelling mistakes :) When I saw the name Lucien I misread it and thought Lucifer ;) I can't help but like this story. It's already perfect as it is so , I'm very sorry that I can't contribute anything substaintional other than maybe a more bigger vocabulary .(But this fic as I said perfect as it is) Just one thing, some people at the beginning might roll their eyes and if they have very short attention span , they might (a teeny-tiny might) click the back button as soon as they see so many reference to classical stories in one chapter (somewhere in the beginning.) ~Bell |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very different story! I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it! as all the other chapters...anyway, i find Jessica very...strange...oh well...reading on... |
![]() ![]() ![]() o...people always interupt at the wrong time...reading on... |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehehehehe...i find Regina or "gina" very entertaining! can't wait to read more! wait...reading on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh...the evil stepmother...maybe...DUN DUN DUN! reading on. . . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is just too creepy and i am still wondering who mystery man is! reading on. . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice chapter again. . . .Casey's mom. . . .you are a very good authoress! reading on. . . . |
![]() ![]() Wow. I can't believe this has only a few reviews. I mean, come on, it was very, very well thought out. I love how everything connected, and how that even when I'd figured it out, I hadn't figured EVERYTHING out. So, the ending was still perfectly satisfying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. this was an amazing story. I couldn't stop until i finished it. really... wow. amazing job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. just wow. it's ten thirty at night and i am reading the first chapter, so pardon if i sound weird. it is Kaleigh if you did not know. anyway, this is a really good start and i love the name! reading on...tomorrow... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, i love this story...if you didn't get that from the last review. Anyway, I have to go for a while but when I return i will continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What does the title mean? Sorry random i know but i'm just curious. Anyway, I just put a face to Lucien so i feel better. still don't have a face for Aimee but that'll come soon i suppose. ok love it so far gonna keep going. |