Reviews for Aedin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lucien...i love his name. but i don't trust him... love the story! Aimee is as much a mystery as Lucien. That's awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. this is really intriguing. i can't believe you wrote a whole story in one day! although, i've done that too but the chapters were really short, not like yours. i'm really interested to see what happens! and i bought secret window and sweeney todd! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! oh my gosh! that was so sweet! i love it! |
![]() ![]() it's so cute! .. well, not really.. cute.. but it's... pretty? ...? anyway, i like it. it's like twilight. i love that book. XD i am getting random again. haha. sorry. i'll just go.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well done! You created a great universe with some wonderful symbolism. Thanks for posting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it took me a couple of chapters to get the gist of the story, but it was incredibly thought out and detailed. i loved the part about the gardener and his son. very nicely done. i do not think it was anticlimactic. very beautiful story. -DD |
![]() ![]() wow, this is beautiful work! the ending seemed a bit abrupt to me, but the concept is great and it really kept me interested. So interested, in fact, that I haven't done any homework yet. please keep writing, you have real talent |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story initially and the characters. I found the elves and the garden interessting, and I liked the way you portrayed the various characters. But it really was extraordinarily anti climactic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wowza! You sure got this up fast and did it well! This was so good! I loved it! |