|Reviews for Life Of Dionne|
| not always sane chapter 5 . 8/23/2009
aw hell no, that would never ever! happen to me! (only cuz i'm the oldest of three boys) but if i did have an older brother now way in hell would he stop me from seeing antone ever
| sarcasm is my middle name chapter 5 . 7/22/2009
Omg, that's so sad. I'm glad i only have one older brother...
| XxSiennaxX chapter 5 . 5/6/2009
Oh goodness, Dionne must be feeling quite guilty now - if it wasn't for what she said Sidney and Gerald would still be together although it's understandable that Sidney would want to escape to someone who was blameless of the actions her own brothers put her through. I wish Dionne would just tell her parents - they may be protective but surely they could see that her brothers have gone overboard.
I love your story and can't wait to read more :)
| xbrunnettex0 chapter 2 . 4/24/2008
how old is Dionne here? like 13 or 14? but yes good update
| misery sister chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
I don't really know what to say... there are no glaring mistakes in this piece - but at the same time, there's nothing in this prologue that can catch my attention and make me want to continue reading. No interesting characters, no catchy dialogue.
You have the style, but no substance.
Good luck though! You have the tools for a great story.
| MySunshine chapter 2 . 4/24/2008
poor dionne. how old is she? i think i read that gerard is 14, so dionne must be lie 12, 13?
sheltered by overprotective parents and broters,jeez. i can only imagine what that would be like. sounds nice on one side, and kinda annoying on the other
so does gerard know blake and AJ, those two jerks?
hope you'll update soon, it sounds like a great story!
| MySunshine chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
i was about to say, it's too short, but never mind xD
very interesting beginning. it's nice to have background information about dionne
| FRANCi chapter 2 . 4/24/2008
So far, so good. Update, please!
| MelGrl chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Plz update soon! i'm definitely looking forward to reading more.
| xbrunnettex0 chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
hmm interesting... update soon