Reviews for Invocation
Perfectly Paradox chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
Well, I must say that my favorite part of this is, "They rip my head/ Right out of my skull..." Just because that it such a vivid and startling image. I noticed that the rhyming schematics are inconsistent. I don't know if you did that on purpose or not, but I find I like the first two stanzas that don't rhyme better than those that do, just because, to me, words that have the power to rip your head clear out of your skull wouldn't rhyme. That's just my opinion though. I also liked the image of "Zero times zero times zero times/ Zero evermore..." It's so depressing in such a thought provoking way. You should read the poem "Numbers" by Mary Cornish. It might make you rethink the word zero. Here's a link: .

Cheers.