Reviews for Unexpected Places |
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![]() ![]() (Shortened my anon. name for ease. :D) Aww, poor Jaymie! I can recognize some of the differences-I mean, I couldn't tell you exactly what they were, but I can tell that you've rewritten it. I would love to know more about the box-packing thing in their house, but that's just my curiosity getting the better of me. :D Really well written, almost no spelling/grammar errors...ah. I love it. XO, Z |
![]() ![]() OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. YOU ARE UPDATING. I AM SO HAPPY WITH THIS. :D Okay, I'll stop yelling. And I won't stab you with a spork because I don't have any on hand. But I will go back and re-read and re-review just because I love this so much! YOU ARE AWESOME! Keep going! Oh, and if the chapter title isn't too long, you could put NEW in it, or just a N: at the beginning. That would be a small but easy way to read the new ones, eh? Okay, enough rambling. I'll go read now. XO, Z |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you started the re-write? and I think since the original unexpected places was so good, the re-write will be awesome :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You do that and I'll wait, sounds like a plan eh? Love your story though, hopefully you end up making it better than the way you intended. ~Racquet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, darn. I was so happy for another chapter. Anyway...hope the updates go well. I hope I'll enjoy the updates, but the old story will forever hold a place in my mind. :) P. S. Maybe not. My memory's not actually that good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good stuff. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story, it's amazing and i wouldn't change a thing about it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Phew...I can breath again. That was so scary! What's awesome is that you're really good at the spy stuff, so it seems kind of real. Keep up the amazing work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm terrified. Did you know that? Well, I am. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! I LOVE Jaymie and Nick together...they're adorable. I can't wait to see what happens with Mitchell! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice...I loved this chapter! :) Jamie and Nick are adorable together. Too bad that they're "cousins". Excellent description, as usual. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome...I love! The idea is really cool, and I love how they're so...rich and snobby. Or at least pretending to be. Excellent description! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I was right about the other winner being a decoy like thing. And um...wow...great chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What's happening? *GASP!* Was Stacey a decoy? I can't wait to find out! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A drinking problem? The perfect little girl has problems i see...don't get me wrong, I love Jaymie as a main character. I just like getting to know character's darker, more evil sides to. Great job! :) |