Reviews for Unexpected Places
blurrylights chapter 4 . 9/27/2008
Wow...talk about intense. It's crazy there! But it sounds like so much fun! :)
blurrylights chapter 3 . 9/27/2008
YEAH! Go jamie and nick! And Jamie sounds like tons of fun. Gray leggings and a skirt is the girls training uniform? Talk about sexist...ha ha, jk. Great chapter! :)
blurrylights chapter 2 . 9/27/2008
Sounds pretty, but is there a catch? Oh...:0 ha ha. Great job!
blurrylights chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
This is amazing so far! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
adra.duckies chapter 13 . 8/23/2008
This is my favorite story so far. I am waiting, admitedly immpatiently, for a new chapter. I love the whole idea. How did you come up with it?
lostlotus chapter 13 . 8/20/2008
love it!
daling chapter 13 . 8/20/2008
hey this is great!

keep uploading. x))

luv u n ur story! xDD
labratv chapter 13 . 8/19/2008
Well, well. When I read the summary, I knew this would be good. It was probably the most creative summary I've ever seen (and that's a lot of summaries, mind you). I was not disappointed. The story is funny, emotional, and engaging. I love it! -Amy
happy ever afterxx chapter 13 . 8/19/2008
The update was really good :) more soon?
class.act chapter 13 . 8/19/2008
Okay, I have a major doubt: didn't they buy stuff when they were snooping on the Brooke's at the grocery store? I sorta remember them putting stuff in their trolley... so, how come they have no food?

Also, found a typo:

but I doubted that, even if he owned better-looking cars, he "wouldn’t" (WOULD) want to be too flashy for a midnight snooping.

I like this chapter! All the adventure and added mystery- who is that guy? And, I just realized, since the bugs were only in the master bedroom, and he was so unconcerned about getting caught, did he already know? Or was he just dumb?

I really can't wait to read more, update soon!
Jevanminx chapter 13 . 8/19/2008
Oh, who was the guy snooping round as well, he obviously wasnt too bothered with being cught, very strange.

JM
AmberAmbushed chapter 6 . 8/18/2008
Awe, that's exiting but sad at the same time. I love this story, btw.
didgeridoo chapter 13 . 8/18/2008
Finally, a new chapter...but it seems so short! The only grammar/spelling error that I found (reading casually) was "without even making so much of a creek"-it should have been "creak." Good job-wait, good job doesn't do it justice. Can I simply say I want more? :D

Zoey
geminibaby6789 chapter 13 . 8/18/2008
Thanks for the chapter! I wonder how Nick feels about Jamie. Is there going to be a chapter in Nick's p.o.v.? Maybe a little segment in a chapter just to see things from his perspective? i don't know. It's just a suggestion. Can't wait for the next one! Update soon! :D
jayniee chapter 13 . 8/18/2008
Good Job ]

Please update soon.
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