tango mango, hahahaha p

Lol, I only just finished chapter one, but it's freaking hilarious xD haha

I love mango's thoughts xD

omg!

i LOVED this!

absolutely brilliant! XD

Great story. I've read all the chapters. It's great. Good story

This is awesome. Great great story and it had me laughing so hard at some points! Mango is one of my all time favourite characters and Tuesday (I LOVE that name; I was seriously contemplating naming my (imaginary) kid that as I was reading the story... not the first time I've read a character with the name but every time there's a new one, I love it even more) Tuesday's just Tuesday. I really like the way you write too. Thank you for successfully distracting me from the moral economy of the peasant which was getting all too annoying and depressing (reading about peasants getting screwed over by the system does not make for good bedside stories... hurray for econ). I'm going to stop rambling and go to sleep now.

Thanks for posting! :) :) :)

OMG! Mango is so fabulicious!

The whole time I was having De ja Vu, because Mango is what I sound like, inside my head, with the insesscent rambling and all! And I really like Mangoes, which are yumy, and Tuesday was just so edible! They're so cute together! Yaysies for them!

Aw that was so cute! :) I love Mango! Haha you never did tell us why he started calling himself that. :D

What song was playing on the radio in this chapter? :)

Um, inconsistency alert... You said in the first chapter that Mango is 17, yet here he is 18. Also, I believe you said that the only car they had was Monica's van. But that may be just the impression I got instead of the actual wording...

Love, love, love, love, LOVE this piece! Its so squee! Tuesday kicks ass!

Mango actually reminds me of one of my friends, apart from the fact she's female... But anyway... SAME PERSON!

Ok, now I'm putting you on Author Alert, your stuff kicks ass!

Absolutely amazing story. Mango is just the craziest guy... and I really like the stream of consciousness style. Congrats on finishing a story (I have yet to get there unless it's a school assignment, sadly). while I kinda wish there was more to the story, upon reflection it makes more sense the way you ended it. It's nice to not have everything tied up neatly sometimes. Great job!

Wow, amazing story! I, for one, fell in love with Tuesday as soon as he was first described as a fuckable soccer player. ;D But I'll leave him to Mango, since they're better together, anyway. xD I love the spastic writing style in this, it totally fits Mango's character. And don't worry, I live for angst. P Even though I loved this story, I'm glad there won't be a sequel, because I agree, some authors need to learn when to shelf a project. Unless you plan on writing a sequel, don't write one! That's what I say. ;P Anyway, thank you for your amazing contribution to my fluff-obsession! D

Okkay so I lovve this story oddles and bunches and all that. But I have to say that half of it doesnt make sense. Like...you always switch everything around in the story. First you said Mango's hair was blue. Then you said it was pink. First you said he was a top. Then you say he's a bottom. First you say that they dont have that much money and that his mom is a yoga instructor but then you say that they're rich and that she's always at work like she works a office or something. First you said she never wears shoes and here she is, wearing heels. Just a ton of little things like that that dont really matter in the end but are just really kind of confusing when you keep switching them around, ya? But so um, ya. You might want to fix those things but lovely story, otherwise

Wow. I could only tolerate one chapter. Mango is fcking annoying. I want to shoor him, he sounds so bloody obnoxious. Jesus. Also, I'm not really feeling your writing, too... Messy.

Aww, that was so cute! I loved it so much!

Great, now whenever I have a mango on Tuesday, I'll go crazy. Especially if I have coffee on that Tuesday that I have a mango. And it'll be a Caramel Macchiato. :D

But yeah, I couldn't tear myself away from the computer. It was so good! And it ended so wonderfully! I don't think it requires a sequal. It's beautiful on its own.

But I must say, the summery was catchy. I wanted to read it the second I saw it.

So yeah. :D

Good writing!