Reviews for Caramel Macchiato
Max-Ashworth chapter 13 . 2/17/2009
Whee! I loved this story. Had so much fun reading it, truly did. xD For about the first half of the story, I kept going

MANGO, YOU IDIOT; HE'S BI! JESUS CHRIST. BI! Have you never heard of it?

During that one chapter where Mango is talking about how there's always someone in the locker room looking and then he's like, I bet I'm making you straight people feel awkward, I was like: Lol yeah, I bet the straight people DO feel awkward reading this.

It actually made me wonder for a sec what it felt like to be straight. 8) But that sec wasn't long enough 'cuz I was like, But ew, men.

Anyway, I'm rambling! I'm gonna go eat now, 'cuz I didn't get up from my chair for the 3 hours it took to read this~
HaixBai chapter 13 . 12/13/2008
Can you at least answer 1 question?

Did they go to same college.

Like...if there was a sequel, what would at least of happened?
Tempre's Twilight chapter 13 . 10/16/2008
UwaaH! That was a super sad ending! Well, I guess happy... but cliffhangers always leave me sad! Unless I'm writing them...

anywho, I absolutely ADORE your writing style, and I am going to read everything you've ever written and ever will write - i think. Consider me your official literary stalker :P
DropAHeartBreakAName chapter 12 . 10/13/2008
DropAHeartBreakAName chapter 9 . 10/13/2008
Haha! 'Boobs are nasty!' I laughed my ass off at that... Sorry I didnt review each chap. I love Mango.
Mistress of Apple Pie chapter 13 . 10/5/2008
very, very, berry, cute story )
the flaming river chapter 10 . 9/30/2008
First you said he was vergan, then you said he liked to be ontop, then you said he liked to be on bottom. In the beginning he had purple hair or maybe it was blue but it sure wasn't pink. you also said that his mother had him when she was 17 but than he had an older sister three years older than him? I liked the story anyway. It was really good made me stay up past my bedtime which is so going to bite me in the butt later but whatever. :) Congrats! You finished it!
Spurious chapter 13 . 9/28/2008
MUCHLY enjoyed this story. XD was grinning all the time. XD

although if you plan to review the story at some point, you might look over a few things:

- You at first say Monica didn't work much until after the father disappeared, yet later say she's a work-a-holic. Also, she teaches yoga a few times a week, yet is rich, and never at home?

- At the beginning of the story, Mango's hair is blue. Then, suddenly, out of no-where, it's pink. Then I think it turned blue again, but I'm not sure.

- In the beginning, Mango had no car, cause Monica refused to get him one, and refused to let him borrow hers, yet later, he has a truck? Or maybe that was me missing something...

- In one chapter, Mango says he tops, then a few chapters later, he claims he's a bottom.

*thinks* yeah, I think that's all of the points that threw me. but then again, it's late, I may have missed or misunderstood some.

anyway! Great story! much love! I shall have to read more of your stuff when I'm not in actual physical pain due to tiredness.
Arastel chapter 13 . 9/25/2008
This was ph so entertianing, I love the characters! chapter 13 . 9/11/2008
i missed the last two chapters? . ...? School has kept my hands tied behind my back, though there is this TOTALLY AWESOME GSA and now im like rocking in my seat and i already started your awesome other story, which is kinda funny since im also rereading (for the millionth time) "keeping you a secret" by julie anne peters and theyre kinda similar and YAY..umm...yeah..but yaay!
Sunshine Bear chapter 13 . 8/24/2008
I have to go pee...

OKay. I went pee. In case you were wondering.

I FREAKING LOVE YOU! I WANT TO HAVE YOUR BABIES! Only not because babies are weird looking.

I love this story. It should have a church so I can go pray to the Mango gods and stuff..


So I love this.

I really do.

I love this story.

I can't say it enough. Because I love this story.

Feel my love! IT COMES IN JELL-0!
Liviania chapter 13 . 8/24/2008
So cute! I like the ending, and I'm glad you're finishing it before you hate the characters. (It's nice to keep reading something, but the quality always goes dowhill when the author is tired of it.)

Cattails chapter 13 . 8/18/2008
Oh, good, he was joking. XD And things are finally resolved! Yay! I totally didn't realize it was the last chapter 'til the author's note :P But it's a good ending and it was a really fun story! :D
Cattails chapter 12 . 8/18/2008
Aha! I think they're making progress! :D Mango, Mango, Mango...he is so slow... But that's okay, as long as he catches on in the end! XD O_O Wait, dying? D:
I Live in Tattered Dreams chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Great jog on the story! I loved it one hundred percent.
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