Reviews for Caramel Macchiato
mandrake-o chapter 3 . 5/9/2008
I like this story. It amuses me.

) Mandraco. chapter 3 . 5/9/2008
Mango is HOT! I love this story! Im excited! OMGZ! I'm... shaking?
Sammius J. McGennien chapter 2 . 5/3/2008
Hahah, chapter two was very enjoyable - it was long, it wasn't too fast-paced, and as always with your stories, it was very well-written.

Hm... I think I need to go find other people to comment on - I'm clouding your review pages. P

Anyway, a cliff-hanger chapter - wow! Hahah, hurry up with that next chapter. ;)
ContemplativeJoyce chapter 2 . 4/27/2008
This is very interesting..

I'm really curious of how the characters are going to interact with each other.

Good job so far though :)
Sammius J. McGennien chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Right; so I'm assuming this isn't a one-shot?

Hm... I've yet to read your other stories, although I do like what I've read so far. Like I said in the last review (whether you read it or not, I have no way of knowing), your grammar and such could still use improvement, but no one is perfect.

This story was pretty good, especially since it's onle the beginning. (I'm not going to compare it to the last one I read, because then I would have no opinion) Have you planned anything out ahead of time? Anyway, yeah, back to the story. P

Honestly, I was thinking, "Was Tuesday really a girl pretending to be a guy?" but then I realized that would be a bit convenient: they were both liars, hahah! What I'm most interested in is seeing how these characters develope; for example, is this how Tuesday normall acts (calm about these types of things), or is he really just acting while Mango's mother is around? Either way, if you do write more, I'd be glad to see what you do write.

Sorry if this review doesn't really... construct, much, but it's the best I could come up with, really. Hahah, looking forward to more chapters.
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