Reviews for Inspiration
wingedauthoress chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
wow- first of all, i must say that i was completely blown away by all the imagery and description you wove into this piece; it was VERY nicely done. i was also impressed with the stream of consiousness the character experienced- also very well done. in the dream sequence, when the narrator was speaking to... the other person, it was a little grammatical thing- i noticed that you had 'they' instead of 'he' or 'she' and i always thought that 'they' was associated with a plural amount of people- but idk. at any rate, it was amazing! keep on writing!
ChaseMichael chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
wow...does that sound familiar,anybody? i know it does for me.
Shadow Whirlwind chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
That was nice. Well written, and I liked the imagery.