Oh, I loved it!

god i l;ike cornor ;) he is sweet nd loyal to her (: great one shot 3

aww:) thsi was cute:0

haha, messed up how she didn't want to go public though but yeah :) cute.

I liked it

Okay, good. But... Missing something.

WOH! Go Cassie! Okay... I'm too in the story. Your from Philippines? Wow, is it in Luzon, Visayas or Mindanao?

I liked your story. It's a really creative idea, and I really love it _

Aw ... really cute and sweet! Good job!

aww. cute. :D

Aw, how cute! :)

Aw! They're so cute together...and I'm glad that Cassie realized the errors of her ways. Awesome oneshot. :)

Cute. The ending's a little over the top, but I suppose that's okay.

There were just two things that bothered me and that I'd suggest that you fix.

1) [Confusing, huh? Considering that Devin, Connor’s best friend, was holding Cassie’s waist. Well, to clear things up...the two most popular kids at their High School were single, available and hotter than ever.] Talk about blunt. You should've tried fitting this information smoothly into the story instead of throwing it at the reader. A subtle line or two would've been fine. And scratch the 'available and hotter than ever' part; it's annoying to see blatant conceit about characters coming from the author.

2) This ties in kind of with the previous part. [Why would Connor take an interest in her? She wasn’t a cheerleader, and she wasn’t even popular...She was normal, and that wasn’t right.] I liked Cassie up to this point, but this bit of one dimensional characterization made her seem like a generic fake flake. In essence, tone it down a bit. Other than that, I like that Cassie's logical and actually thinking things through. Good job on your oneshot.

improvement from the old one

but they both good :)

BRILLIANT STORY!

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