Reviews for certain times
SerialXLain chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Oh Bowie reference. Almost missed that one, man.

So...is this why you've been in a pissy mood? D: But why? I don't get it. Du hast Eric...and I thought you were happy with him... When you were with Jack, things were just constantly fucked up.

Anyway... I really liked the first verse and this part "gritty evidence slurring

down the gutters,"

Muchos love-os.
Rachizzle chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
David "Bowie" _ HM... WHO COULD THIS BE ABOUT... Anyways.. this poem made me feel yucky because of "bloodied rust crusted..." and yeah. :( and the mentioning of liver. XD but... cute! haha